Fruit Burst Writing

Here is my story about fruit bursts:           Fruit Burst
Red barrier protecting the 3D rectangle from destruction.  My saliva frothing up and my mouth ready to devour the red block.  Sluggishly unwrapping it as it crinkles and the red block get's some freedom.  The scrumptious strawberry smell wafts past my nose.  My mouth firing the mouthwatering block around like a ball.  The saliva deliberately turns red.  My teeth slicing it's body one by one.  And the red block accelerates down the slide and into a green pool of acid.