Arguement writing

The school should days go to 5pm

I disagree school day should go to 5pm.  Firstly they will get tired and wake up late.  Secondly children will get hungry and they will have to wait until they get home.  Finally they might walk home late and it isn't safe in the dark for kids.

Firstly they will get tired and wake up late.  Because when you are tired you become clumsy and when you're clumsy you drop cups and bump into people and that's usually a sign that we are overtired.  Being tired means we take less risks.

Secondly children will get hungry and they will have to wait until they get home.  Because about 21,000 people die every day of hunger or hunger related causes.  You can go for more than three weeks (21 days) without food and water.

Finally they might walk home late and it isn’t safe in the dark for kids.  Because nearly 1.3 million people die a year in road crashes each year,on average 3,287 deaths a day.  Car crashes is ranked the 9th leading causes of death and account for 2.2% of all deaths globally.   Also it gets dark at 5:15.

These are my main reasons why school should not go to 5pm.  They will be tired, we will get hungry and it’s not safe walking in the dark.

By Tyde